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Cambridge 12, Test1

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Free flow of information as much as possible in science, business, and academic world have its own supporters, whereas others believe some information is too important or valuable to share freely. I believe there are repercussions to consider.

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Free circulation of information can help researchers and entrepreneurs make more new products, medicine, and discoveries. This can result in a more comfortable life, cure illnesses such as Covid 19 and even boost businesses because of the competitive market it creates. Furthermore, should information flow freely in schools and universities, education standards will be raised automatically, and academics have the opportunity to push boundaries faster. For instance, a new piece of data in physics can be utilized in car manufacturing as well as space exploration. Hence, the beneficial effects cannot be ignored.

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On the other hand, sharing information freely would cause financial losses because in some cases the information is too valuable. As some researchers along with investors spend years and expend money on a project to finally have a new product or medicine, they may not reap the financial rewards expected because competitors are ready to take advantage of the new data and launch a similar product immediately. However, this issue can be addressed by fielding a patent on inventions as it is already being practiced in some countries. Another problem is abusing sensitive information by terrorist groups and dictators who have radical beliefs, which could pose a threat to the whole world. There should be repercussions at least about critical information, which is likely to lead to the production of mass destructive weapons.

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In conclusion, having access to information freely can certainly have some benefits for countries and individuals; however, it is difficult to have a strong one-sided opinion since not everyone has good intentions.

Cambridge 12, Test2

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Today, some countries’ population consists of a relatively large number of young adults in comparison with the number of older people. While there are both advantages and drawbacks, I assume the former eclipses the latter.

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When a country’s young adults account for the majority of its population, there might be some difficulties in fulfilling their needs. For example, governments have to create job prospects for them, which is a time-consuming and costly task especially for poor countries. This can result in anti-government protests and in some cases chaos in a country. Another important area is entertainment which should be varied and cheaply accessible so that the young can enjoy and release their energy. Otherwise, they may end up with depression or vandalism. Hence, it is essential to exploit the energy of this generation to the fullest to develop the country.

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However, a country thrives rapidly when there is a large number of young workforces. The youth have more physical and mental abilities than the elderly, which can lead to high productivity. Take South Korea and Japan as the host countries in the soccer world cup in 2002 as an example. They used their young workers and specialists to build impressive stadiums and ultimately reaped the political and economic rewards. Moreover, the young are usually more familiar with state-of-the-art technology, which is of paramount importance in today’s progress of nations. This is because, today, technology is an indispensable part of any project or career which enables young people and a society as a whole to progress rapidly.

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In conclusion, in my opinion, young people being the most can create an optimum potential for a country and its citizens to flourish and achieve their goals if managed skillfully.

Cambridge 12, Test3

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, some people believe it is necessary to spend a large amount of money on construction of new rail lines for very high-speed trains. Others argue that it is better to spend the money on improving existing public transport. In my opinion, both viewpoints have merits to consider.

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Some believe new fast trains can help between-city commuters in a country waste less time because they can arrive at their destination faster. A high-speed train can travel up to 350 km/h, while a normal one reaches up to 200 km/h. This faster speed can facilitate the transportation of goods and raw materials across a country too, which could help boost businesses and the economy of a country. Furthermore, very fast trains would do less harm to the environment. These trains usually run on electricity compared to normal trains or airplanes exclusively powered by diesel and gasoline, all polluting the air. Therefore, the advantages of the first view cannot be overlooked.

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Others think improving current public transport can bring more satisfaction to a larger group of people compared to between-city commuters. Doing such practice means new buses, taxis, subways, and railcars that are usually used more in urban areas which enables city residents to choose the most suitable means of transport of their volition. Repairing bumpy roads and streets can be part of the improvement too which results in gratitude from people while commuting. This brings satisfaction to taxi and bus drivers as well because they spend less money on repairing their vehicle, especially the shock absorber and undercarriage; clearly, a smooth road is what many are expecting. So, the second view seems advantageous too.

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I, however, believe countries differ from each other regarding their geographical features, spatial distribution of their cities, and even their existing public transport. Take Canada as opposed to Switzerland as an example. One is wide and large so much so that to cross the country it takes days by a bus or a normal train. While Switzerland is as big as a large city, and you can cross it within some hours. Therefore, it is far from logic to adopt one approach for all countries.

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In conclusion, there are different underlying factors that can determine whether to improve the current public transport or invest in building new rail lines for high-speed trains. In my view, one size does not fit all countries in this scenario and this shall be delegated to individual countries.

Cambridge 12, Test4

Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that It is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Children being able to make their own choices about routine matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) will probably form a society whose members only think about their own wishes. However, some argue that children should be allowed to make decisions about matters that affect them. I believe this is a double-edged sword.

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Freedom of choice among children may bring about self-centeredness. Imagine a child whose great concern is to choose what to wear, what to eat, and what game to play every day. This indulgence internalizes a habit in the subconscious mind of children from the very early stages to only think about their own wishes and forget others. As a result, they gradually turn into inconsiderate adults who might not be community-minded, causing serious relationship flaws in their family or even at work, and, at a larger scale, a thoughtless society.

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However, this freedom can help children grow their critical thinking skills. Having had the chance to choose among many options, in a restaurant, clothing store, or a gaming club, children are very likely to learn evaluation and analyzing skills. This also provides the opportunity for them to try and error in order to recognize their own talents, interests, and threats around them. Hence, in role-playing decisions such as choosing their school or a major at university, or marriage, they will, hopefully, make wiser decisions because of the higher-order thinking skills they have nurtured.

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In conclusion, to reap the rewards of letting children make their own choices and avoid its consequences, I believe parents and elder siblings have to adopt an approach to raise thoughtful children by being a good example for them. In this way, we can make sure to have a caring and wise society.

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