نمونه رایتینگ تسک دو آیلتس (مقاله پنجم)

رایتینگ تسک دو ایلتس
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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in future than it is now.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It is expected that, in the future, people’s health level will be lower than it is now. I personally favor this view because of the significant changing trend in our lifestyle.

It is true that no one knows about future and how science may lift our health standard by pushing the boundaries. However, since the underlying factor in improving our health is physical movement and doing exercise, it is far from logic to be optimistic that a new discovery or system will work efficiently enough to improve our health. This is because almost all scientific and technological projects seem to focus on humans’ comfort, helping them to do their daily tasks at a push of a button.

People’s welfare will probably become worse due to the load of pollution we are generating every day. People all around the world are breathing toxic air containing a large amount of CO2 and lead causing respiratory and cardiovascular diseases. Our food chain is also contaminated, which stems from the pollutants found in soil and water. Who knows what kinds of unknown and probably incurable mental and physical diseases are going to expect us in the future?

Majority of people in the past used to be farmers and shepherds, which were physically demanding jobs. This itself was a kind of exercise making them strong enough to be at least physically well. However, today, sedentary jobs are predominant and this has already made a worsening change in body structure of many people, their neck, spinal column and hand shape for instance, which I believe is going to be worse in the future. The reason is that human has always been looking forward to comfort, so the same trend is more likely to continue. Such changes in anatomy contradicts with human’s well-being and will show its paralyzing effect at later stages of life.

In conclusion, it might be difficult to foresee the future in terms of people’s health standards. However, in my opinion, since our lifestyle has been on the worsening track for a while, it is difficult to be positive about future in this regard.

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